Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?
Working abroad is a privilege for skilled people in poor countries to improve their standard of living. And I agree that rich countries should permit job opportunities for them.
High economic countries can benefit from hiring foreign skilled workers. Not only will these workers become an asset to a particular company because of their acquired talent, but they can help raise the economy of the host country as well. Since they have the optimum expertise, businesses will run smoothly and cash inflow is more likely. If the business makes a continuous increase in profit, the government can obtain bigger taxes which is used to further develop the country.
Another good reason to hire from poor countries is that the wage is cheaper, which means low salary expense and high output. Though the hiring process is tedious and costly, there is a higher rate of return on investment. In addition, the host country will definitely receive recognition and trust from these poor countries that they helped and can expect more employees whenever they need.
On the citizens’ side, they will probably get threatened that they will lose the job that is meant for them but it is not possible. In most European countries, the government ensures that their citizens are prioritized before a foreigner can fill-in the position in case their countrymen failed to meet the requirements of the job.
Therefore, highly skilled workers from poor countries are not a threat to the host country, instead, they are an asset that can advance the economy further.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09019607843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57006695183 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4262460942 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233144373176 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950116325799 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091030913637 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149186263989 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954925885972 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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