In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Staying at the normal weight level is a common issue in many countries and most of the concern is being overweight after reaching a certain age. There is only one reason behind this problem and that is in the food intake.
In countries such as Japan, foods are not fairly nutritious yet the number of calories is considerably less compared to the US. Most busy people would choose take-out meals due to the limited time they have, therefore, fast-foods is the main option. In Japan, fast-foods are common but, there are also small food stalls that provide a variety of homemade dishes to choose from. Unlike in the US where only fast-foods are mostly common limiting their choice for either a hamburger or other high-calorie foods. Comparing these two countries, Japan has only 3.5% obese individuals in statistics whereas the US has almost 13% which is to be expected based on the kind of food outlets available.
Another issue is on the household consumption. Most parents want what is good for their kids’ nutrition, but a completely healthy diet within the family is rare since most kids hate vegetables and parents will get worried if their kids will not eat as much as the needed daily meal proportion so they will just go against eating healthy food and cook high-fat foods which the children love. As these spoiled kids grow up they will consume what tastes good for them and only few will think about the outcome.
To solve this, the government must impose a law to only sell healthy foods in food outlets and parents must not spoil their kids and allow them to consume healthy food from the first time they take food in their mouth.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76736111111 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34007943027 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6033035561 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112181248441 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442886823346 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365228907563 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741737407617 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249600502546 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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