Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Good values are supposed to be learned primarily within the family. Yet, some people argue that it is the school’s responsibility to teach the children to do so which I greatly oppose.
Although the goal is similar, there is a big difference of discipline coming from home and school. In school, there is only one teacher among a number of pupils, this means that less attention is given to each kid or probably none at all. Aside from that, there is a limit as to how much discipline a teacher can give whereas, at home, parents can properly train the child without any form of misconduct which is a concern in schools because parents cannot favor the kind of control measure that their kid is facing.
Parents are the most appropriate people to teach their own child. Since they know what kind of attitude their kid has, handling him is easier and the effectiveness of incorporating discipline is higher due to the kid’s trust for his parents and thus, he will eventually follow. So, the conduct of a child would definitely show the kind of family he grew up with.
Therefore, parents must be the role model for their children and should not rely on schools in terms of disciplining their own child.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71361502347 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61688978504 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.007462271 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195246736012 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856514240538 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600775698626 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1284176677 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514589942393 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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