some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have recorded numerous data as a means of keeping valuable information in the field of science, business, and education which is useful for future references. Yet, others reckon that there is information which is needed to be kept confidential. But it really depends on a specific field of study whether the data can be shared or not.
In case of academic use, it is our right to know all the information because it is an academic paper which is meant to be taught and learned by students and the academe. It is the freedom of people to accumulate knowledge and widen their understanding of educational materials.
On the one hand, both scientific paper and business research should have confidentiality on the data they have. For example, in a scientific study about the existence of aliens and other extra-terrestrials, it is still denied to the public despite the claims. People believe that the US government has kept it hidden and they do exist. Drawing a possible reason for this can be a prevention from scaring-off the humanity from their personal opinions about these creatures as an instrument that will end the human race. As for the business setting, one example is the Coca-Cola. This product is one of the best-selling brands of drink for many years and to prevent competitors and imitators, they have kept their ingredients a secret ever since.
In conclusion, keeping certain data is essential because it can affect people in various ways which leads to detriments despite the knowledge it can provide.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98046875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94900661489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1996325496 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168231921884 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592785062552 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406132786625 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092896088444 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052933862499 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.