In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People want to have equal rights and opportunities but there are lots of countries who have certain individuals that earn very high in which, people argue that governments must create a maximum pay rate which I greatly disagree.
There two reasons that governments should not impose the control of salary level. Firstly, high income means high share in taxes, thus, making an individuals’ net income lesser than what it actually looks like. Second, professionals with utmost skill level expect high salaries. If they can’t get it from their country, then working abroad will give justice to their expertise.
Loosing highly skilled individuals will have a negative effect on the country. In particular, those people who work in a medical field like neurologists who perform complex and detailed work expect a good amount of pay. If these highly skilled professionals decide to work abroad due to less income they receive, then the patients would suffer, unless these individuals love their work more than the amount of salary they earn.
These individuals are valuable assets to companies, therefore, they are worth paying for.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, thus, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34806629834 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69205379363 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6817955579 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190693984652 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802419824806 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036828110112 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10987888852 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315896804022 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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