societal benefits of facebook
People in this generation became more inclined to the use of social networking sites which made a lot of changes in the way we interact with the people around us. The way we communicate with each other, the way we represent ourselves, the way businesses function and the way we develop social relations. These are just a few of the changes made by social networking. And one of the sites that imparted a lot in building this relation is Facebook which has approximately one billion active monthly users as of 2013. Base on this large number of users, this is proven that Facebook is beneficial to the society. So what are its benefits?
First, it creates worldwide communication which is essential in our society. With Facebook’s video chat feature, staying in contact with people over distance makes it quick and easy. In this way, you can save money for phone bills. Aside from that, this site also has a private messaging service which lets you and the person you want to talk with can communicate without the knowledge of other Facebook friends online. If you also want it to be publicized, you can directly post a status and tag the person you are trying to communicate or just simply post on his or her wall. And talking about posting, others can have an update on your current day to day activities as long as you keep on updating your status. This also helps in finding a missing person like long lost friends and relatives.
Second, it is the best portal for marketers. Without spending much money and breaking a single sweat, you can easily promote products through advertisements. Unlike other online advertising which reaches only 27% of its intended audience, Facebook can introduce you to people who’ll love your business and give an average of 91%. In short, there’s a bigger chance of succession. Fan pages can also be of greater help in maintaining your relationship with customers. By the way, fan pages are an inexpensive alternative to engaging customers on your site. With these pages you can communicate with your Fans all at once, send them invitations whenever you schedule special events. On the counterpart, each time a fan interacts with your page presents with a wealth of information which can help improve your business.
Lastly, it is a law enforcement tool. Police officers and NBI’s find Facebook very useful in solving crimes. They simply look at the public information or sometimes, they’ve gone undercover by creating fake online identities to befriend suspects and view their private information. But if there’s only less time left, and they think that there’s an imminent threat of danger, authorities request for private data to the Facebook site but they must undergo proper channels before they can have the information they need by showing a warrant. These techniques have been done for quite a while and it has slowly been catching on across the country.
With Facebook’s help, our way of living is made simpler which made us dependent on it. We cannot live without Facebook. We treat this site as an extension of our daily life routine and working style. That at least an hour a day, we spend time on Facebook. It’s like a black hole that sucks all functions needed by people which makes it hard to leave. So, with these simple proofs, we can say that Facebook plays an important role in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... of changes in the way we interact with the people around us. The way we communicate with each other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, second, so, while, at least, in short, talking about, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 71.0 20.9802955665 338% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 31.9359605911 244% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2823.0 1207.87684729 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 575.0 242.827586207 237% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90956521739 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 3.92707691288 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72791575853 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 139.433497537 215% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 379.143842365 232% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 4.6157635468 390% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 12.6551724138 253% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8112425886 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.21875 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.96875 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 6.9802955665 301% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108048640184 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351875711094 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501038611913 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675615296825 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371590603154 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 55.0591133005 251% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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