Here and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Majority of the people own at least one car which they use as a medium of transportation. This dependence on private vehicles poses many drawbacks that need to be taken care of to prevent more negative consequences.
Traffic becomes a primary concern when there is an excessive number of vehicles. In particular, Philippines is among the worst country in terms of traffic condition which makes it harder to reach a destination at a designated time. This results in serious problems like those cases of people losing patience and caught fighting while queuing along the jam-packed highway.
Moreover, the presence of air and noise pollution can lead to health problems among people living along the roadside as well as those people using public transportation like jeepneys which is a four-wheeled vehicle designed without any window covering for ventilation. In terms of health issues, drivers are the most affected but aside from that, these people depend on passengers for their income. If all the people have their own transport, it would greatly affect the drivers financially which will eventually lose their source of income.
To solve this problem, the government has set a coding for private vehicles and cars that are allowed to run for a specified day, but this has not solved the problem completely. One solution I can recommend is to create railways just like the situation in Singapore where most people use trains as public transport and cars are rarely seen on the road but some developing countries are not financially adequate to support such ambitious project.
It might be convenient to own a private vehicle but it has many downsides that directly and indirectly affect the people, therefore, it should be lessened and possibly stopped.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e queuing along the jam-packed highway. Moreover, the presence of air and noise ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be lessened and possibly stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, at least, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15679442509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76718675488 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8685326149 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230367290075 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837987895959 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825114839141 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121519655078 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759621158836 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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