School and university students learn lesson far better from their teachers than from other source, such as internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is believed that every learner, whether at the school or university level, is better taught by their teachers than any infomation from the mass media. While i agree that teachers play a basic role in the overall development of evry child, I do not think it is necessary to overlook the exposure gained outside formal education.
Teachers structure their instructions to childrem from one step to another. The most essential teachings evryone has to encounter in life follows a trend as organized in a formal academic setting. Elementary school subjects, for example, would introduce any young learner to most important facts of life, such as counting numbers and writing letter. This is further expanded at the higher institutions. Without this basic knowledge, people might not develop as they should. For this reason, it is logical to say that teachers and lecturers own an important share in the mental growth of a every individual.
Nevertheless, the role of mass media, such as television channels and social media platforms, holds some importance. Socialization brings out another part of life which may not be incorporated in a structured curriculum. Debates, at various levels, have their ways of exposing innate abilities possed by any individual, irrespective of their academic levels. People improve by discussing among themselves, and this social lifestyle is key for development. To ignore this part might mean not being sensitive to the need for overall growth.
In conclusion, I do not agree that more academic heights are reached only through lessons delivered by instructors. Socialization is also an important element.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36538461538 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9444838609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4145545061 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162165030416 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476708173705 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672339490007 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105198197189 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700968133167 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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