In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them
It is often said that in many nations of the world, a good number of individuals are becoming over weight, resulting in progressive decline in their health and fitness levels. This problem could be from lack of adequate exercise. However, it could be tackled by individuals engaging in regular exercise.
One of the factors that has contributed to some people developing obesity in many countries is due to lack of exercise. Many individuals working in some organizations, such as banking industry, are faced with meeting up with targets and therefore, have to work seating at the back of the computers throughout the day and even during the weekend. As a result of busy schedule, they hardly have time to exercise and consequently, are prone to develop obesity. For instance, a recent article published by Nigerian Cardiology associated, showed that 56% of patients managed for obesity are mainly bankers who mostly work round the clock and do not engage in physical activities.
Could there be a way to solve this problem? Certainly yes. One possible way of proffering solutions to curtail the rate at which people come down with increase in weight is provision of gym centres especially, in companies where staff hardly have time. This will enable workers to utilise such opportunity to walk out routinely. To illustrate, in the company that i am currently working, staff are mandated twice a week for thirty minute exercise at the gym centre inside the company. This has helped so many of the workers to have average body size.
In conclusion, undeniably, there are several factors that predisposes an individual to be over weight, of which lack of regular exercise is one of them, but there is also a way by which it could be mitigated, by spending few minutes at the gymnasium which will ultimately help reduce development of obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00649350649 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78893647087 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1811089415 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157591318677 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573366861966 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568855736658 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954255957645 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383316090549 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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