Scientific Research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Scientific research plays a role important in development of countries. It is argued that research should be managed and operated by the governments, and not private companies. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the government should carry out and control various scientific research projects in different fields. In this essay, I will explain why that is true.
There are several reasons to support my view point. Firstly, the government is capable of providing financial assistance to various research topic. Moreover, support of the government which could help scientist comfortable makes spectacular ideas, that have not been executed by private companies. Secondly, many research projects are secret from countries, hence it has to utmost security, namely study and develop in the research field of military. In addition, scientific studying expects a lot of time and persevering, while almost private companies only need to run after profits.
Specifically, all Nobel prize to be made by scientists from the scientific institutes of the government that bring to brilliant development for people life. Therefore, scientific research has been expanded more and more intensively if the government has clearly plant and generous view.
To conclude, after analysing the various aspects of the argument, it is clear that the government support is the best way to perform research projects. Meanwhile, private organizations are consistent with this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: planted
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...organizations are consistent with this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96941542742 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9394512145 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305142463088 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100089304836 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877158443799 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181853776047 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107169877869 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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