Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some arguments about which would have authority in doing researches relevant to science. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this responsibility should belong to the government.
First, the government probably has a more stable financial condition. For example, money which private companies use for carrying out the researches comes from the profit of business. Apparently, there is not any firm confirmation that companies always working well enough for ensuring the steady financial source providing for researches. In contrast, the government often has a budget for these scientific surveys to make sure they are carried out without any interruption. Spending on science experiments which can improve the life condition for people is also one of their responsibilities.
Second, the great influence of the government have on people can be more than privates companies. When the results of these researches are public pronounced, they will get many attentions from people because surveys made by the government are usually considered as official information.
Third, these researches done by the government would be more reliable than those undertaken by private business. In general, doing scientific researches might be considered as marketing tool with mostly aiming to profit and brand promotion. The results of those might not bring back social benefit but more personal for private business. Therefore, government should take over this duty to advantage of society.
To sum up, despite the disagreement about which has the right to control researches between the government and private companies, I still support the idea that the former is appropriate organization for this activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64230769231 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97318140925 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4291393196 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299745914852 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986162894862 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687957317214 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155345251554 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477389593588 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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