Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Conducting scientific projects related to some facet of human’s live is considered as the hottest matter in modern time. it is argued that private organizations should be responsible for carrying out paramount scientific research. while this may have some minor advantages in short term. I side with the statement that this is outweighed by enormous disadvantages.
To begin with, it is more beneficial to conduct scientific projects by private enterprises due to its respondents more quickly to demand than national authorities. To implement scientific researches whether or not make sure it success require a huge amount of money that private companies can afford for prohibitively expensive expenditures compared to national institutions. If government invested a huge amount of funds in scientific researches, this could lead to an imbalance in government spending. Furthermore, those scientific researches would put incredible pressure on national budget, more precisely authorities cannot sponsor and concentrate for other potential sectors such as education and healthcare. This may have adverse impacts on the development of any nation, especially developing countries. It is evident by a wide range of coverage that there have been loads of private organizations conducting valuable research on various areas such as technologies or renewable energy sources and achieving remarkable success. This is thanks to its appealing high pay packages for their professional group who gain more in-depth valuable expertise.
On the other hand, there are a wealth of benefits if governments determine the direction of scientific projects for the well-being of their citizens. In recent years, the outbreak of COVID-19 epidemic, a spectacular opportunity for the national pharmaceutical industry, it is likely that many people do not trust scientific research, in particular vaccine projects when private sources are involved. Therefore, it is true that if vaccine is studied and produce by governments who gain great faith by populace. By doing so, it helps any nation likely control the infectious pandemic and ensure their communities’ health. Furthermore, without government control, some companies could carry out illegal research related to nuclear weapons or unethical human experimentation which pose serious threats to society in a long run. It is likely that many industry-funded projects have been poorly conducted and intentionally misleading, having detrimental impacts on some facet of human’ lives.
In conclusion, private companies sometimes carry out scientific research quickly owing its budgets, however the advantages of placing the responsibilities for scientific projects in government hands far outweigh any drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, in short, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82133995037 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23907559137 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575682382134 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.448480147 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288291118455 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875701903771 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901772245013 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193557117619 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374263438204 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.