Scientists contribute more to society, so science students should get more support. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Science acts as a systematic approach and considering a fundamental source to provide a protection to the normal people from the sobering problems which are normally arising due to the human and natural activities, so that is why, it is becoming an essential for the authorities to provide hands to the students who are majorly indulged in the science scenario.
To commence with, distinct types of diseases are occuring in today's world. As, a new generation's students can easily eliminate these issues, especially for the conscious health of human as well as for the beautiful nature through their independent thinking if they will perfectly receive support in the terms of education and money. For instance, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, a large number of science students have an abundant amount of general knowledge, due to this , they can easily explore the distinguish concepts then consequently there are a lot of equipments required to develop every science students upto a maximum point.
In addition to this, in comparison with earlier scientists, the new science students can make alternative ways to attract the majority of people. Due to this, the individuals can get thorough insights into the distinct types of measures to protect and save the indispensable sources of environment. For example, in America, a young student have made an opposite method to maintain the purity balance of household water just through the usage of small things.It is therefore clear that the young science students can change the attitude of people as together with to protect the surroundings in a little time.
To conclude, science is known as a first and last step for reaching the end point. Although, a few troubles can be faced by the government in a financial form, but, due to its supportness, the science learnees can make own surroundings more beautiful through their hard efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, then, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15705128205 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87477096435 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.703206515 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.777777778 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161209643546 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662575711363 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260834166214 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934396416826 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226695153112 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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