Many activities, which are wholesome, are advised by scientists to people. Despite that many people are aware of good and bad activities impact on their health but people still suffering from detrimental activities and most of which are preventable. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and then suggest several methods that can be carried out to improve the situation.
To begin with, negative activities are more enjoyable compared with positive activities. For example, exercising allows people to acquire useful benefits but people may feel fatigued and dull but playing video games is more relaxing and comfortable. As a result, it may increase the possibility of getting certain disease and will not occur in the near future that people tend to neglect it. To alleviate this problem, we should establish more favorable activities that captivate people. For instance, social applications can add a new function that encourages people to do more physical activities and they can achieve a gift at the end of the exercises. By doing this, people can be stimulated and feel more fascinated in doing beneficial physical activities.
Furthermore, it is challenging for people who are obsessed with unhealthy habits to break. To illustrate, people who are addicted to smoke, toughly reduce the amount of cigarettes consumed per day due to high addicts. Consequently, it leads to some detrimental diseases and people keep suffering from it. To mitigate this, government should levy high taxes on unhealthy products, such as fast food, alcohol and smoking gadgets. If government implemented this proposal, then this solution would impact effectively on individuals who are suffering from harmful habits.
In conclusion, negative activities are more delightful and harmful lifestyles are challenging quitting are two major consequences of the phenom. If the solutions mentioned above were implemental effectively. The problem would be alleviated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48514851485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94935758769 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1166484982 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266563832049 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753350618502 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060526395708 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148170344749 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666511390579 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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