Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Shopping is becoming the most famous form of leisure activity. In lots of nations young adults see shopping as a very popular form of leisure activity. This easy will enlighten why this is gaining more fame and will debate whether this transition is for the best or not.
One of the key reason for this move towards purchasing and this has turned out to be a good leisure activity is due to the importance they get in this society. This is a booming work these days as most of the teenagers spend their time in this as they wish to showcase themselves in a great manner. Most of the people who are engaged in shopping do not fix any time limit for them which end up spending an entire day in it and turns out to be a developing time-consuming job. It is very clear to all the growing minds that the first impression is the best one so they tend to cultivate their interest towards it. Even when a fresher goes to attend an interview, they are being judged first based on the entry looks. This is one of the main factor why all the young minds tend to move their life towards shopping.
However, many develop their interest towards fashion and end up doing this as their daily duty. They got into this because of their designation. These people have to produce new models so they gain more knowledge out of this as they are exposed to different varieties of styles. One’s mind will start to work more when variety of things go inside it. Sitting in the same place will make the brain dumb without creating new ideas and end up being lazy at all times. From a purely designer’s perspective, there is no doubt for this getting a surge as a leisure activity.
In conclusion, the new growth of shopping is very attractive in terms of designer, although this is considered as a challenging one. Many end up doing this at all times which is not suitable for the entire teenagers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a great manner" with adverb for "great"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48985507246 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45620321991 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8150948471 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335606650681 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115014043239 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761241555987 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230231097855 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519998586572 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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