Should children be dealt with an iron hand or should they be give freedom to do almost anything they want? Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Parents plays an essential role in up_bringing of the children. There are two methods of up _ bringing which are followed by parents. Some parents grow up their offspring with an iron hand while other give freedom to their children to what they want to do. I will discuss about both views and give my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are myriad reasons that children should bring _up with an iron hand. First and foremost is there are many things which are taught by parents to their children because children learn many ethics under control of their parents. As a result, they learn good behavior and deal with the society through full politeness. Second is children always follow the those recommendations which are give them by their parents due to this children generally stay away from bad company. Hence, it put good impact on their further future as well as they became better human beings.
On the other hand, some parents bring_up their offsprings with fully freedom environment because they become independent personalities. As a result, they always get success and they do not want to got money from their guadians as their expenditures. Moreover, they always can take evil because they had been become strong and bold. Consequently, they easily solve many problems which effect their personal and social life. For example, if freedom should be given to children by their parents then they easily choose their career which become suitable for them.
I epilogue, although, strictness is helpful for parents to bring_up their offsprings but under alot of strictness, children become weak and timid as well as they do not share their feeling with their family. So, freedom is the best way for up_ bringing the children. Parents should keep focus on their children and their feelings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08609271523 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47826878321 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8977065709 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289672472261 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109746202266 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713933574433 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202190434206 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583653726265 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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