More and more women leaving their homes for work, many people think husband should help their wives in households work. What extent do you agree or disagree with these people.
After few decades, all things have changed because of advancement which touches every aspects of life. Indeed both couples do work together for their best future but certain people think that husband's should help their wives in house chores works. I agree with this statement and this will describe my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, there are myriad reasons behind my agreement why people think so. First and foremost is that, there are many difference between today and past few years living standards because of science and technology, education and so on. That time people thought that women were for only do household work and bring up their children that's it, but now female's do work and leave their home therefore when they finish their work and come back then husband's should help them because both are human beings so they definitely they need some rest, support and care. As a result,the relations between them become strong and they can do better perform in their further life.
However, no doubt, if wives can do another work with their households work then why husband's can not do this. For instance, when office work is done by female's after that they came back home and do kitchen work such as prepare food for family and many more, then male's should wash the utensils after completing meals. In this way they have no burden about anything just because of helping. Apart from it, if husband's will do help their wives in this way they can finish their work in few minutes after that they can spend quality time together. They can share their feelings and thoughts with each other then these things increase understanding level and love between them. Consequently, they can live happily life and enjoy every moment of life.
In epilogue, undoubtedly husband should help his wife because Bible says that, man and woman are two bodies and one spirit. So husband should help her without any hesitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9179331307 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17130654497 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2425900433 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392569321869 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121721968704 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115650971951 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230525444484 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717395740948 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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