Should People Shop in Online Shop

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Should People Shop in Online Shop?

Nowadays, the activity of online shopping has risen steadily around the world. It has become a new lifestyle for people in modern city since 21St century. Even so, there are still many people who prefer buying their daily needs in a market to shopping online. Shopping online for certain people has more advantages than its drawbacks. This essay will argue that while online shopping may have some drawbacks, it is indeed more beneficial than harmful.

It is believed that online shopping has some disadvantages in terms of the way of transaction and the quality of goods. If the buyers have concu...

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is sometimes flaw
is sometimes in flaw

online shop is very utilitarian in their life
online shop is very useful in their life

they do not have to go to a market which they may spend much time
they do not have to go to a market where they may spend much time

will be available anytime.
will be available on any time.

Sentence: Consequently, if this occured, the buyers would suffer financial loss without return.
Error: occured Suggestion: occurred

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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.76 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.928 7.5

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