Small businesses should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Gender is deemed to be a controversial issue in recruitment. Some people believe that small businesses would rather not employ young women who have not established their own family because of later paying maternity leave. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this action.
Each kind of person has their own strength, and young single women, in some cases, even display better performance compared to married ones. When a woman does not have her own family, she has more time, more enthusiasm, and better mental or physical health owing to the fact that she does not have any burden of taking care of her sweet home. By contrast, for those who have already got married, not only do they have to spend time with their children but they also have to handle housework or their family-in-law, especially in Vietnamese culture. As a result, young women would be a crucial and ideal factor which helps a business to have top prospects.
Furthermore, the above point of view is too critical and overrated. Women have to suffer a lot during the occasion looking after their offsprings, so getting maternity leave should not be one of the aspects to recruit a woman. Besides, men cannot give birth, which means that this payment does not prevent them from applying for a business and men consequently account for a higher proportion in those firms which pay much attention to maternity leave. With current development of society, the public would not response to such discrimination in gender like this.
To conclude, there are several ways to save the cost for a company apart from trying to avoid paying maternity leave. I suppose that if companies resist this old-fashion view, they would probably miss any opportunity to thrive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, apart from, i suppose, kind of, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98969072165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63599643898 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3940359677 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300084100426 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859885440723 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910741699111 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162596260251 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071017692281 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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