More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are often seen as a place where people have plenty of opportunities to make and meet, but there would be some drawbacks. In my opinion, government can take several actions to improve life in the urban.
The major problem which people consider the most would be the cost of living. Not only do citizens have to pay for housing, transport but food, a fundamental factor, would be a barrier to their finance. Besides, urban living conveys such social problems as high crime and poverty rates. Furthermore, air quality could be a key factor affecting directly to people's health due to the exhaust from street and public transport systems. As a result, life in the city could be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are many ways to tackle these problems. First, investing in affordable or social buildings to diminish the burden of finance should be encouraged widely in order to put the pressure of the cost of living down. Second, government could enact their power to ban vehicles from city centres or promote the use of cleaner transports to reduce as much pollution as possible as well as the congestion. Third, developing provincial tớn and rural areas by moving the industrial areas to the suburbs or surrounding regions could also be an effective way to share the pressure with city life.
In conclusion, government could certainly implement a variety of solutions to enhance the quality of urban life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96195652174 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59215202615 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66847826087 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8243829445 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180108903102 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726013184072 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698543945191 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138577536023 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117488393604 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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