Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
People have different views about the effectiveness of mental strength as opposed to physical strength and fitness in sports. While there are certainly some benefits to keeping stable psychological well-being, I believe that people with good physical prowess would compete better.
On the one hand, mental health plays a crucial part for sports participants. When people engage in sportive activities, they should pay intense attention to the process to complete the challenging tasks in each sport. For example, a goalkeeper has to follow step by step rules from the ball’s movement of the striker to the position of the yard, which needs a very high concentration to keep the ball at a safe distance from the goal. As a result, when the mind is not focused, it is hard to cope with physical tasks as well.
On the other hand, I suppose that when people are in good physical condition, their athletic performance would be more excellent. If you are physically fit, not only does it help you increase energy level but it also boosts your mood or attitude. In fact, the fitter and stronger you are, the more flexibility and agility you have, in other words, the body coordination in movements would certainly be ensured. Therefore, your achievement would remain stable or proportionate to the development of your muscle and joints in your body.
In conclusion, although mental strength benefits us substantially, physical strengths and fitness would bring more opportunities for sportsmen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18106995885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87911187173 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0103290967 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235251391215 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865839112652 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615268146316 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145391473821 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572557750886 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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