Cities are often seen as a place where people have plenty of opportunities to make and meet, but there would be some drawbacks. In my opinion, government can take several actions to improve life in the urban.
The major problem which people consider the most would be the cost of living. Not only do citizens have to pay for housing, transport but food, a fundamental factor, would be a barrier to their finance. Besides, urban living conveys such social problems as high crime and poverty rates. Furthermore, air quality could be a key factor affecting directly to people's health due to the exhaust from street and public transport systems. As a result, life in the city could be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are many ways to tackle these problems. First, investing in affordable or social buildings to diminish the burden of finance should be encouraged widely in order to put the pressure of the cost of living down. Second, government could enact their power to ban vehicles from city centres or promote the use of cleaner transports to reduce as much pollution as possible as well as the congestion. Third, developing provincial tớn and rural areas by moving the industrial areas to the suburbs or surrounding regions could also be an effective way to share the pressure with city life.
In conclusion, government could certainly implement a variety of solutions to enhance the quality of urban life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00420168067 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65248543398 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626050420168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8580322301 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270697592866 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952249862195 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735970920273 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170815711809 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611320948477 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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