IN SOME AREAS OF THE US, A CURFEW IS IMPOSED, IN WHICH TEENAGERS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE OUT OF DOORS AFTER A PARTICULAR TIME AT NIGHT UNLESS THEY ARE ACCOMPANIED BY AN ADULT.
The crime rate of America is soaring despite the conduction of many proactive legislations in order to prevent it. The some regions of the US have a policy which does not allow teenagers to go out after a decided time without an adult. I believe that it is a positive development as it saves many lives and reduces the rate of crime.
As far as the beneficial outcome of a curfew is concerned, it has been admired by many citizens because it is an effective solution to combat illegal activities. By imposing a prohibition on the grouping, it addresses many social issues such as drug supplies, kidnapping, murders, and thefts. Teenagers are unable to oppose the influence of these activities by themselves moreover they are innocent to make such a strong decision which lead them to involve in many anti-social activities. Hence the guidance and protection of an adult would save them from being victim and also help them to make a right choice.
Another rewarding consequence of this law is that it prevents many form losing their lives. Many argue that the teenagers loose their freedom due to this type of draconian law, even though the need of it should not be neglected as it saves many lives. Generally, young adults are considered as the soft- target and easy to manipulate, ultimately they are convienced to engage in murders which can take many lives. In California, for instance, police department has spotted highly sensetive areas where the record of young criminals is a substantially high, hence this law has brought the number of murders down within last two years. It is clear that the effeciency of it is remarkable hence implimation of it would help.
Overall, an assistance and accompany of an adult help teenager to avoid crime and also teach them how to not contribute in it, which is usually most likely to occur at certain time period of day. The advice, intellegence and experience of adult saves many young adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86186186186 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71310311195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6328022086 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224918353128 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698246122133 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097168310677 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141514700297 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580859059495 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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