Some believe that going to college is the best way to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to start working after graduating from high school. Discuss these two views and give your opinion
Opinions are divided on whether people should start working as soon as they finish high school or whether higher education is essential for anyone who desires to pursue a successful career. From my perspective, I am in favor with the later view.
There are several reasons why some people believe that going to work after graduating from high school should be more preferable than attending college. From their perspectives, lectures at school focus on theoretical points and deskwork. In other words, students are provided with overwhelming theories which can be hard to apply to the real-word settings. Moreover, colleges and universities may fail to give students adequate hands on experiences and extra curriculum activities though they require plenty of research papers. As a result, some people involve in work as soon as possible as they are allowed to expose to the reality and learn in a more practical way.
However, I still side with those who hold the view that students should go to attend college after graduating from high school. The major reason is that without a bachelor’s degree, people may struggle to land a well-paid job. To be more specific, in the competitive job market, the employees oftentimes rely on the number of degrees that ones earn to decide whether they are qualified enough for the job. In addition, people who pursue higher education may have higher chance to be promoted at work in comparison with those just finish high school. By way of illustration, superiors usually possess at least a bachelor’s degree and even be required a master’s degree in the same area to gain promotion.
In conclusion, while I understand why some people believe it is better to work than to continue studying after high school, I am of the opinion that people should go to the college if they would like seek for a successful career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99356913183 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71927646455 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3502733426 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309150650009 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103730950124 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10241074391 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209508060849 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766468269368 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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