nowadays, more and more people decide to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
It is becoming increasingly popular for students to attend foreign education in recent years. This can bring both positive and negative implications.
On one hand, although studying abroad is costly, its benefits can compensate the financial loss. To begin with, oversea students believe that studying in a foreign country is the best way to improve language proficiency. This allows them to use the foreign language on a regular basis. As a result, those who are educated abroad, though at first find it challenging to keep up to a conversation with native speakers, experience their language skills accelerated significantly afterward. Apart from this, a multitude of students claim that they become more independent of family since they are away far from home, which is a great chance to develop interpersonal skills. In particular, skills of financial management and problem solving are enhanced as these students no longer rely on their parents helps. It is reported that oversea students become more mature, comparing to theirs peers in home country.
On the other hand, attending foreign school can also bring several drawbacks. Firstly, culture shock usually happens when students the first time visit new country, simply because of cross-culture misunderstand. This can lead to stress and loneliness for quite a number of students in the first few months, or even worse that some of them withdraw from foreign school and return with their family. More importantly, studying abroad often places a financial burden on many people. Therefore, students receiving oversea education find the need to have a job, which helps them to pay for tuition fee and living expenses. However, this may lead to distraction from schoolwork as these students are unable to balance between work and studying. Some students also report to be sweated in the strange land.
In conclusion, while studying abroad can be popular for its huge benefits, it can have several downsides as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76582462211 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5936785602 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129601542075 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457291977322 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518291784281 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772817667391 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338988443144 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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