Some believe that the Internet makes people and community become isolated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world, the influence of Internet has been a matter of great concern. Besides the outstanding advantages of the Internet, I personally agree with the statement that the cyberspace makes users separated from the society.
On the one hand, there are reasons why many critics believe that the Internet assist individuals closer to the world. First of all, the cyberspace brings people the chance to know the other side of the world. A whole host of people are using the Internet constantly up-to-date the information from online articles, websites and social network.This is well illustrated by the fact that only with devices connected Internet such as smartphones or laptops, users, in anywhere, have the opportunity to connect with colleagues, roommates, partners or even international friends via chat or video call. Therefore, the Internet almost certainly has significant advantages in some extents.
On the other hand, I tend to agree with the view that the cyberspace has an adverse impact on individuals, especially make them separated from the community. This is because citizens, in modern life, are likely to hardly join social activities, instead of lie and stretch on a coach and playing the game or scrolling aimlessly on Facebook or Instagram. For example, in the past time, when I studied at my primary school, every week I held in some debates between students about some topics related to education. These events bring them the chance to raise their voice. Consequently, nowadays, students tend to find it not interesting. The second thing is that individuals are increasingly fearful of face-to-face communication because they seem to completely rely on digital devices and the Internet. As a result, people seem to become isolated in the society.
In conclusion, while some people hold the opinion that the Internet assist users to connect with the world, I still support the idea that these things more and more make a whole host of people isolated in the community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22839506173 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86684371163 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1222385604 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212409239852 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663441678333 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509852429788 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132784978712 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279251248951 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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