Some believe it is good having people with extremely high income in the country, while others think government should try to limit it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
All societies in the world consist of rich and poor people and some portion of the society believe that there are more benefits to have people with high income while others believe that the government should regulate the per person income rate. this essay will discuss the both views and show why its is better to regulate per-person income.
In one hand, having people with high income, helps the country’s development because most of the rich people often have high turnover businesses. Most of the time these businesses not only give jobs for the unemployed but also attract foreign investment to the country. As an example, owner of the cinnamon grand hotel chain produces many jobs for the people in sri lanka while they expand their hotels all over the country and also attract other hotel owners to invest. Moreover, high income professionals have direct impact on the country’s reputation.
On the other hand, it is true that having high income people is beneficial to the country, however there is a fair chance that this will create an imbalance on per-person income rate and increase poverty. While most of the income distributed within this rich class, middle income and low-income people will suffer from it. So that government should involve to make balance to the income distribution. As an example, if government increase the base income rate, every employee can manage their expenses for country’s living expense rate. Moreover, increasing the income taxes on these high-income people while using that tax income to improve public services also be beneficial.
In conclusion, although having rich people have a positive impact on the country in various ways, there is a fair chance that not all the people will benefit from that. In my opinion, government should make regulation to balance this so that not only the rich people but also the mid and low-income people benefit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07594936709 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4635298517 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496835443038 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.135835436 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364339218572 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139537226331 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713357743687 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23384129105 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522662373177 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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