Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Crime has always been a serious issue as far as society is concerned. With advancing technology, crime has also evolved. Some people believe that nowadays there are better methods available to tackle it, whereas others argue that the methods involved in committing these unlawful acts have surpassed the quality of tools to the law enforcement agencies. Thus the overall handling of this issue is ineffective. In my opinion, I personally agree with the first point of view. In this essay, I would be discussing both views and would try to explain my point of view in detail.
To begin with, I would like to mention a few key factors which help to control crime more effectively. The first of those factors is better surveillance. With the incorporation of digital tools and artificial intelligence, better monitoring is possible now. Besides that, computers and more evolved audio-visual equipment have enabled us to gather adequate and more accurate evidence at the crime scene. The second factor, helpful in keeping the criminal activities under check is better transportation aids. To emphasize this point, I would like to give the example of Dubai Traffic Police, which uses high-end cars like Ferrari and Lamborghini as highway patrol and thus have a better chance to catch a speeding vehicle or a criminal in pursuit.
On the other hand, now I would like to discuss the challenges, currently being faced by law enforcement agencies in keeping the crime rates low. Ever since computers eased our lives by helping us in almost every field including banking, security, travel, healthcare, and education, there has been an ever-increasing risk of hacking these magnificent devices and rendering us socially paralyzed. In spite of better tools available to check criminal deeds, the global incidence of cybercrime is rising exponentially and thus posing a much bigger challenge for police and government. Apart from that, due to social media platforms, there are more cases of identity theft and targetted bullying occurring at present.
To conclude, I would like to mention that in spite of significant upgrade in techniques to commit a crime and global rise in the specific type of unlawful activities, our saviors like police and guards have a better chance to avoid such activities from happening as well as to catch a criminal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... tools to the law enforcement agencies. Thus the overall handling of this issue is i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16578947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83221842711 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571052631579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0136319791 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.470588235 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166690399814 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510785854115 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521309995568 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943298708441 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457196696423 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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