Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, while others feel that crime is being tackled effectively now.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Crime has always been a serious issue as far as the society is concerned. With advancing technology, the crime has also evolved. Some people believe that now a days there are better methods available to tackle it, whereas others argue that the methods involved in committing these unlawful acts have surpassed the quality of tools to the law enforcement agencies. Thus the overall handling of this issue is ineffective. In my opinion, I personally agree to the first point of view. In this essay, I would be discussing about both views and would try to explain my point of view in detail.
To begin with, I would like to mention a few key factors which help to control crime more effectively. The first of those factors is better survillance. With incorporation of digital tools and artificial intelligence, better monitoring is possible now. Besides that, computers and more evolved audio-visual equipments have enabled us to gather adequate and more accurate evidences at the crime scene. Second factor, helpful in keeping the criminal activities under check is better transportation aids. To emphasize this point, I would like to give the example of Dubai Traffic Police, that uses high end cars like Ferrari and Lambourghini as highway patrol and thus have a better chance to catch a speeding vehicle or a criminal in persuit.
On the other hand, now I would like to discuss about the challenges, currently being faced by law enforcement agencies in keeping the crime rates low. Ever since computers eased our lives by helping us in almost every field including banking, security, travel, healthcare and education, there has been an ever increasing risk of hacking these magnificent divices and rendering us socially paralyzed. Inspite of better tools available to check criminal deeds, the global incidence of cybercrime is rising exponentially, and thus posing a much bigger challenge for police and government. Apart from that, due to social media platforms, there are more cases of identity theft and targetted bullying occurring at present.
To conclude, I would like to mention that in spite of significant upgrade in techniques to commit a crime and global rise in specific type of unlawful activities, our saviours like police and guards have a better chance to avoid such activities from happening as well as to catch a criminal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... also evolved. Some people believe that now a days there are better methods available to t...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...o evolved. Some people believe that now a days there are better methods available to t...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... tools to the law enforcement agencies. Thus the overall handling of this issue is i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, as to, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80003022677 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5503707936 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168226444843 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508393092747 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506318453506 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096276822469 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505582780188 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.