Some people think healthcare should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for healthcare by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is an ongoing debate over the significant expenditure, that health care demands. Some believe that the governments should take care of the health of people, without asking any money from them, while others argue that an individual should take care of the medical bills. In my opinion, it is one of the logical and moral responsibilities on the part of the government, to take care of the well being of its people, and essential medical facilities should be available to all for free.
To begin with, although, spending money for health-related matters is a non-productive expense on the government’s part, it should be comprehensively taken care of by them. This is because, individuals are paying high taxes in hope of living a convenient and better life, and efficient medical coverage, is one of the key parameters to enhance the quality of life. Besides that, it is also a moral responsibility of the regulatory authorities, to reduce the sufferings of a person by providing quality medical care, even if that individual is financially unable to pay for it. By failing to do so, there will be an increase in the disease burden, which will indirectly affect the growth of the entire community and nation.
However, it is vital to establish a guideline, regarding the medical facilities and procedures to be provided for free. Improper planning in this regard will exert significant pressure on government funds. For instance, it is essential to manage diseases like heart attacks, diabetic coma, and road traffic accident at the earliest, and the government should provide them for free. In contrast, procedures like dental bracing, breast augmentation, or fat removal surgeries, need not be supported by free healthcare schemes, as none of them are life-saving measures. There are numerous examples available, where injudicious use of free healthcare adversely affected the government finances to the extent, that whole system failed to function. The health care reforms in the United States of America is an appropriate example of this misuse, that forced the US government to withdraw many beneficial health care programs for its people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 883, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much beneficial health', 'a good deal of beneficial health'.
Suggestion: much beneficial health; a good deal of beneficial health
...at forced the US government to withdraw many beneficial health care programs for its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22766570605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05684502481 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564841498559 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3028932895 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.538461538 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228816163637 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791917404422 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627401721188 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159633717066 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473855433243 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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