Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child.
Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school?
What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child’s education?
Adults always think children can live through childhood with no pressure and sadness while the truth is not. Child nowadays receive too much pressure and most of the negative assessments come from their parents. I personally believe parents in modern society have to be strict in right way and do not let their kids shoulder unrealistic expectations.
First of all, parents always tend to educate their children in the way that their parents educate them. Also this will influenced by parents’ own disposition. Some parents hate rule and wish their kids can live in free and happiness, so their children have no rules to restrain. Secondly, lots of parents wish their kids study hard and be success in the future to improve the life, especially in poor family. Even the rich family have raise the requirement toward child because of the growing competitions. Hence, many children receive high pressure in an early age and some of them even gain mental problem.
It is understandable for some parents to push their kids hard since they have great deserve to escape from poverty and their kids are their chance. But parents’ expectations should be in the same level or just higher little with their role in society. For example, it is difficult to let kids who come from poor family entering the private school and pay for its high school fees. Also, parents have responsibility to teach their kids what the rule is and how to be a good citizen when they grow up. I believe this is more important than anything else.
To summarize, some parents give their children pressure because of their experience while some are just for its worry about future. I believe it will give more benefit if full child’s childhood with happy and fun but not threaten and pressure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...ir parents educate them. Also this will influenced by parents' own disposition. Some ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'raised'.
Suggestion: raised
... poor family. Even the rich family have raise the requirement toward child because of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94701986755 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56097947086 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7424230826 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450946311361 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145854395332 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10235575122 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29297884306 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569275621206 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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