In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
With the continuing economic development in some countries, habitants in modern world have much higher level of material life than their ancestors. Meanwhile, some counties also have serious challenges, such as overweight problem or lower health and fitness level among their citizens. In my opinion, these problems are the result of poor diet management and lack of exercise. This essay outlines some solutions associated to those issues.
To begin with, individuals who live in a well-developed country may don’t need to worry about the shortage of food; however, people may unconsciously eat enormous delicious but unhealthy food, like cream cake, sweet soda or other junk food, in their daily routine. Thus, one solution is revealing full ingredients information to consumers and educating them. For example, the government can release a law to force the food producer to indicate fat, salt or calories information on the package. Once understanding some food might contain unhealthy component, people will choose what to eat more carefully.
In addition, in modern city, most habitants work in the offices where usually have air conditioner and comfortable chairs. Individuals have less chance to do physical activity and tend to not only have more weight but also be less healthy. To solve this problem, government can encourage companies to set the small gym in the offices by offering tax reduction. As a result, employees will have more chance to do sport during break time.
To sum up, in my view, to make people have better physical condition, government should demand food companies to reveal necessary information on the food package and persuade them to erect gyms in the offices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ingredients'' or 'ingredient's'?
Suggestion: ingredients'; ingredient's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30627306273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80642286792 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664206642066 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5589041432 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175081267983 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567032276737 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450019410278 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922898277479 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554795438172 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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