In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.
In some countries, there is a huge disparity among people income. , few argue that this distinction between the wages is healthy while others present the view that the government should have command over the salaries. In my opinion, the difference in income is prosperous for a country and its economy.
Primarily if there's a contrast in the pay of the population gives rise to a salubrious competition where everyone competes to develop and make a better living. Further, not only this race helps the economy but the skill development of the people. However, if the government interact with the pay caps it can disrupt the employee's morale. an example of it is the Indian economy before the globalization when the government had the authority over the pay scale of the workers and after when the government decentralized the authority a boom in the economy was observed.
Indeed the income difference can also give rise to a chaotic environment with discrimination on the basis wealth one poses. Furthermore, this discrimination can take the shape of a huge protest around the nation. to minimize such risks the aspect of government should be involved in the matter of pay scale and removal of social taboo which is stuck with low income. therefore to do so the government have to meddle in the affairs of workers pay and make the uniform pay scale according to the profession. a certain paradigm of it was seen in the French revolution when a class difference between clergy and peasants gave rise to an armed conflict which continued for years.
To conclude, I think direct authority over income of workers is not an efficient idea. the government can help is by empowering poor with free education and health, so they can save and invest money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94612794613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79865771812 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5208136929 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146476920071 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052471660302 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571548740097 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100935984819 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794919362152 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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