Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?
Population structure always play a significant role in economy, politic and other aspects for country development. Nowadays, the population of teenagers is increasing in some countries which might cause both merits and demerits. In the essay, I would like to account for present and future consequences of this phenomenon.
Multifarious positive effects is predictable behind this happening. First and foremost, youthful generation plays a phenomenal role to flourish the progress of a nation. For example, majority of young people are expected to learn knowledge and professional skills which related to science, engineering, medical, technology and so on. In a long term, a country will be enriched by these massive number of talented people. And the development of nation is stable by these students’ remarkable jobs. Besides this, young blood is energetic, creative and adaptive. They welcome new changes and also adjust nicely to new environment, therefore youngsters always pursue for betterment of living standard. Hence, a country with younger generation is supposed to be more advanced than others.
However, too many young people who age 15 or under could also lead to financial pressure and shortage of military in short-term. These children do not have enough ability to work or fight, and in this age, education is important for them. So if the government lack in educational resources and military power, the younger generation might live in unstable society with low-educated and unrest. So to keep a balance in proportion of different age group is significant for country.
To summarize, elevation in the number youngsters might lead to some hardships. However, I still believe positive outcomes will surpass negative effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52962962963 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01055527647 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9826341036 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170955539813 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460451738285 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463848451368 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916565729531 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525907473804 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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