Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?
Along with the advancement of civilization, human also demands a higher quality of taste and appearance in their meal. For that reason, countries import a great bunch of food from other regions of the world as a way to bring a diversity of eating choices to consumers. However, beside the immense positive impact, this action also poses several disadvantages, therefore, the problems will be discussed further in this essay.
First and foremost, health is considered to be the most important aspect of life nowadays, as a result, food safety is carefully assessed since it is the factor that contributes most of the part in a healthy lifestyle. As a consequence, government should have a strict evaluation process on whether the food is qualified, otherwise, spoiled food could cause unimaginable consequences toward the people. In addition, due to the good characteristics of the products, the citizens could forget about their cultural food and be dependent on the outside one. Gradually, traditional products could no longer be available and lose their own unique values. Due to that, people ought not to be blindly using these types of food.
Undoubtedly, the bright side of importing food is more recognizable by a great number of people. In particular, a wider range of food choice is applied for every single consumer, making the meal less boring and more interesting. Moreover, these imported products not only improve the economy of the country by providing a giant tax source to the government but also an attraction for tourists who have a difficult taste of strange cuisine. As a conclusion, the import of food offers quite some positive impacts to a country thanks to the variety of products it provides
With all the outputs of the complication mentioned above, it is safe to say that importing large quantity of food is truly beneficial to people’s living. Though, every single person ought to be aware and cautious about the negative effects such trend could generate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10429447853 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88830681078 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5651932967 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260946053457 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763387162038 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674985999543 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142111596061 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378707891025 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.