In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Fast food has become increasingly popular in most countries. People are consuming a higher degree of junkies, resulting in serious health-related issues. Some people believe that it is extremely imperative to impose the greater amount of tax on restaurants that serve those items to a greater amount. I, however, disagree with the claim and argue that physical fitness programs and healthy diet-related awareness are highly recommended to avoid obesity.
Some people think that stringent regulation on taxing those who offer fast foods is the efficient way to reduce increasing health problems because this would cause the owner of the restaurant to mitigate the spicy and oily fast foods which obviously reduces the consumption. Lesser the availability of those foods, more hygenic and innocuous eateries will be offered. Thus, it will surely decline the rate of taking fast foods.
The above reason might hold water but it rests on various unfolded assumptions. Most people, however, argue that to minimize the physical and mental health issues that people nowadays are facing, the government should instead focus on physical fitness and healthy diet programs. Providing a regular exercise program for free will not only allow people of every class to get free service but also gives incentives to people to maintain their weight by seeing others with healthy and fit body structures. Additionally, a healthy diet campaign with the motto of "health is wealth" allows individuals suffering from obesity and cardiovascular diseases to follow those instructions more frequently, which results in improved health. Consequently, these two options will eradicate negative impacts of junk foods at best and minimize to some extent at worst, and hence solve the issue.
In conclusion, to tackle the situation of increment of health related issues in most of the countries, the nation leader should provide awareness related to routine fitness schedule along with the salubrious diet instead of making the fast-food service more expensive. No matter how higher the tax rate will be, people would not stop dining those, but increasing awareness among people might be more effective in making them aware of the negative consequences of unhealthy food. This will incredibly reduce the rate of people attending the hospitals because of illness in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended avoiding'.
Suggestion: recommended avoiding
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he motto of 'health is wealth' allows individuals suffering from obesit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41576086957 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73775926473 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58152173913 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8205789141 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.866666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267378791262 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820803254554 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574080996918 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165588177865 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207836949122 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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