There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The number of people studying tertiary education level has become increasingly popular in the last halfcentury. Some people believe that this is crucial because it increases the literacy rate of the society and should be highly welcomed however, others argue that the situation may result in poorer education system due to more number of students pursuing the course. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of increment of students at university.
The first and the foremost advantage of attending innumerable candidates in university is that it raises the revenue of the educational institution. As more students enrolled, more admission and monthly fees will be charged, and as a result, this will surely increase the fund.
Additionally, the country will definitely prosper through the development of highly skilled manpower. Each year, upon graduation, more students will be ready for relevant jobs. The involvement of university graduates in the job market not only fulfills the position of employment but also enriches the quality of the task due to the use of a higher level of knowledge.
However, the darker side of the argument should not be overlooked. Increasing trends of higher degree often tarnish the reputation of the university. With the influx of the students at the tertiary level, some universities could not pay attention to every single individual leading to poor performance of the student, which would besmirch the prestige of the university. Another disadvantage is that the value of a degree would diminish. Greater the graduate students lesser will be the jobs, and the significance of these people would eventually degrade.
In conclusion, the higher proportion of students enrolling for bachelors or masters has advantages of the production of skilled manpower and university development, yet also brings risks that could threaten the image of the college and unqualified education system. Despite these risks, the increasing higher degree enrollment gives qualified manpower and increases the financial stability of universities, and should therefore be encouraged.
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Suggestion:
...the use of a higher level of knowledge. However, the darker side of the argument...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98055870224 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544615384615 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5181800391 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.466666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169616641585 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057025384415 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655640665694 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937813174969 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724984602538 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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