Food and health play a big role in people`s life. It is not possible to be healthy without watching the quality and controlling the quantity of the food we are consuming. Unfortunately, fast food options become more convenient for most of people due to their busy lifestyle. I believe that the government should applies a higher tax rate on fast food to discourage people of choosing it and replace it with a healthier options.
Nowadays, people are more conscious about their diets, workout and their daily routine. Everyone is trying to eat healthy as much as possible but according to their busy life and how much expensive the freshly produced meal are? People tend to choose fast food. For example, in Australia to eat a healthy fresh and organic breakfast will coast about $20 compared to big eggs and pecan sandwich from fast food restaurant will cost $5 or less. In this case people with low income will prefer to grab their meal from fast food places especially if they have big family to feed. Furthermore Fast food places are available in every suburb which is easier to get and quicker to eat.
However, if the government imposes a higher tax rate on fast food might reduce the number of consuming it, which in return will reduce the number of people who are suffering from health problems. In addition, the government will spend less money on the health care system on people with diet-related health issues. Such as diabetes and obesity.
In the finale analysis, I believe that adopting a healthy lifestyle should come from the person it`s self, but it will be easier with the government help. By imposing a high tax on fast food and less tax rate on freshly produced food. This will encourage people to be healthier and also will increase the agriculture industry in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...food options become more convenient for most of people due to their busy lifestyle. I believe ...
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Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'apply'
Suggestion: apply
...e. I believe that the government should applies a higher tax rate on fast food to disco...
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Line 1, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd replace it with a healthier options. Nowadays, people are more conscious abou...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...roduced meal are? People tend to choose fast food. For example, in Australia to eat ...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wich from fast food restaurant will cost or less. In this case people with low in...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...cially if they have big family to feed. Furthermore Fast food places are available in every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84193548387 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53122230718 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4689076157 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314136968142 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113345524605 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705653765703 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209963585845 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251581305319 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.