In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. what do you think are the causes of this problem and what the main measures could be taken to solve it.
One of problem with occurred in humanity. Every century is wanting to get rid of the older people when they do not need them. It's not a surprise when we see the certain age group especially who are over 50, it's hard for them to find even having experience their curriculum vitae. In this essay, I will discuss the root cause of this problem and some steps to overcome from this circumstances.The
major and biggest reason for this issue of our mentality which we have toward the older people because we tend to believe that they are not good for their jobs, where they need to work physically. Going further, there are numerous reasons behind this thinking, To epitome, we know about that it's hard for them to work at a pace which matches to their young friends.
Moreover, they are more likely to have muscle related injury because of their age. However, we always forget this they are expertise in job which they doing from past 10, 20 as well as 30 years that means for them probability to do think right in first chance is high. Additionaly, they are less likely to enjoy their job which they already know.
Obviously, the company should make a departments where they only higher the old people for their guidance. The government should take a steps to save numerous kinds of jobs and various industries for this age group of people where they can utilise their experience to To recapitulate, I would like to say that, no doubt the above-mentioned points definitely help us in resolving this issue. Apart from this we also need to change our mind about this age and need to think about their experience whenever we hire them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, well, apart from, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63103448276 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4332247409 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8427765097 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224808225093 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901844163628 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372990392182 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147614500616 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044607334684 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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