In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays people prefer to stay alone. Although there are many advantages for living alone by oneself, I argue that it has a lot of negative consequences.
When a person lives by himself, he may get a lot of benefits. First, he will have few responsibilities. He will have to serve himself at home. He may cook his favourite food and clean his clothes. He will not have an obligation to wake up his children or spouse or to drive them to school or work. Second, being alone paves the way to success. Many successful people claim that distraction leads to failure. As people focus on their careers and avoid wasting their time with others, they may success in their lives. Third, financially, the cost might decrease, as the lonely will only purchase their exact needs without extras or for storage. Finally, the house will be calm and relaxing if it is occupied by one person.
On the other side, a lot of problems could happen to people when they are alone. For example, the elderly may suffer emergent health issues that need someone to call the ambulance for them. They may have heart attacks or may faint without being noticed from the neighbourhood. Another aspect is the mental health. People, by nature, tend to socialize. They like to share their daily life events with others. For example, Facebook and instagram show us how people like to tell their friends or followers about details of their lives. If this part of socializing is missing, psychic problems might appear. People may suffer depression or anxiety disorders. They may even commit suicide. Another issue is the help at home that is needed sometimes. People need someone to help them in cooking or paying bills. They may also need a hand during fixing damaged pipes or gardening.
In conclusion, it might appear relaxing for people to be alone; however, I believe many disasters could happen when being alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s favourite food and clean his clothes. He will not have an obligation to wake up ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isasters could happen when being alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82098765432 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48734795773 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5706089272 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0769230769 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953848623718 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297282576621 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427017588168 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903288127563 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732345564943 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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