In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Travelling ABROAD FOR STUDIES IS SIGNIFICANTLY INCREASED in young generation. In my opinion studying in different country produces positive development.
Owing to the recent trend of studying abroad, many students dream to pursue their career and higher education overseas. In underdeveloped countries, the scarcity of modern equipment and learning environment is the main reason for shifting in another country. For instance, Nepal offers scholarships to their students to study medicine in Pakistan in order to make them knowledgeable and skilled, as Pakistan is eminent for advancement in the field of medicine. Therefore, a major proportion of students shift abroad to enhance their knowledge.
Moreover, STUDYING overseas not only update and increase knowledge, but it has a profound impact on personal growth. Living in a new and stressful environment, boost up confidence. For instance, youngsters travel overseas to achieve their goals in terms of higher education, explore the strange environment which is different in every aspect such as language, customs and food, as a result coping skills are enhanced. Furthermore, students learn a diverse way of living. To illustrate, my brother who had the golden opportunity to study in china on a scholarship funded by the government of Pakistan, learned healthy lifestyle modifications by the old Chinese traditions and created their awareness in local people.
To conclude, to travel abroad for studies is increasing in youth. In my opinion, this is a positive development as it enhances knowledge and skills. In addition, it has a positive effect on personality development. Trend of studying overseas will increase in foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60465116279 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15959711087 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6848909671 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541427189684 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241391635916 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386292143644 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04006298924 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299684201263 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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