Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Every single thing we do, affects our environment in a positive as well as negative ways. Some people do not take responsibility to improve the environment and they believe only the government and big companies can make efforts to save the natural world. This essay will argue why it is entirely necessary for each individual to make a contribution to the better surroundings.
Heaps of people think that the government should take measures for the betterment of the environment because there is nothing much in their hands to do. Ozone depletion, global warming, excessive pollution all effect environment adversely. There is nothing much in the general population’s hands to cope up with these big concerns. People also believe that big corporate companies or factories have a major role in it because the major portion of pollution is produced by them and if they solve these issues by proper disposition, the environment can be saved. For instance, the United States of America have enforced a law for appropriate disposition of environmental wastage and set a limit for companies who produce air pollutants.
Despite the fact that government and big business companies should pay attention in order to protect the environment, it is every person’s responsibility to keep the environment safe and clean. There is almost uncountable population of the earth, and if every person tries his best to maintain good surroundings, the environment will change drastically. For example, we can help by volunteer on earth day event, avoid plastic bags, and host a recycling and cleaning events. Hence, it’s an individual responsibility to improve and environment.
To conclude, this essay argued why every single person needs to help with maintenance of good environment and not just the government and large companies. I entirely disagree with the thought of leaving everything on the government and corporations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34868421053 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1714620832 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8216420029 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186099193762 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652561387331 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491357772949 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114415372237 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463507628258 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.