Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.Why do you think that is?What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Crime rates are increased in metropolitan areas as compare to rural areas. Owing to people with different characteristics, availability of facilities to escape are prime reasons. Major steps are needed to restrict criminal activities.
Nowadays, due to increased competition in world everyone is interested in their own life in mega cities. As compared to rural areas people are not aware of activities of neighbors. Consequently, monitoring of criminal activities cannot be done. To illustrate, in Karachi, a criminal group was arrested, involved in vandalizing of buildings and terrorist attack on church. Although they were living there for few months, nobody noticed their activities. On contrary, in rural areas vigilant monitoring of outsiders’ activities is done.
Furthermore, increasing poverty has profound effect on crime rates. unavailability of jobs for young generation has diverted them to fast and easy access to money by committing crime such as pick pocketing to master, plan of hacking bank accounts. As an illustration, recent study showed, lack of job and increased financial demand from family provoke them to commit crime.
following steps can be effective in overcoming crime rates. firstly, strict rules and regulations must be implemented by the government. Penalizing culprits SHOULD BE THE immediate step to discourage others to commit crimes, in addition, monitoring by cameras could be planned. Secondly, the government must provide golden opportunities to earn or if, they are homeless financial aid must be sponsored.
To conclude, IN MY OPINION, PERILOUS OUTCOME OF INCREASING CRIME RATES must be taken into consideration. The government approach to decrease crime rates by strict monitoring and law is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19689788803 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8187381705 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236614144352 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765464186224 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082738033736 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131710979094 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500383427386 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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