in some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It has been noticed that in some cultures, it is significant for people to purchase a house even with a mortgage. Obviously, there are numerous advantages to own a home rather than renting one. However, I believe the strong desire of having a home would conduct a detrimental impact on society and individuals.
To begin with, a large number of people want to own a home because of economic and emotional benefits. For instance, if residents have enough savings for the initial payment, it is definitely a smart choice to pay for the mortgage rather than the rental, especially in the countries where rentals are almost as high as mortgages. Also, the ownership of a home produces a sense of security and settlement for people. They no longer have to move annually from a temporary place to another, with their children and furniture. In summary, those are the two main reasons why people would like to own a property in some areas.
To my mind, it would have a negative impact when a larger population wants to buy a home while nobody lives in renting houses. From the whole society’s perspective, the house price will be extremely high due to the demand for buying a house. Consequently, houses will be a luxury for the poor who need to save every penny and to take their whole life to work for it. Individually, people, especially the young generation, will live under great stress and may overwork for money. Even if they finally have the down payment, they would be bound by the mortgage and miss opportunities to enjoy and explore their life. Must owing a home is harmful socially and individually.
To conclude, it is beneficial that people can buy a house with a mortgage, but the disadvantages of that cannot be ignored. The governments in those countries need to enforce laws to regulate the housing industry and prevent housing frenzy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ety and individuals. To begin with, a large number of people want to own a home because of ec...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74367881457 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7974047164 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208902311758 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688784604678 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465545594758 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126604934699 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456418832886 0.056905535591 80% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.