In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries the ownership of peoples’ home is an important matter. In these countries it is very important to own your own rather than renting it. It might be indifferent for some, but for these people it matter.
Why is that the case? You might wonder. I think it is because your home is supposed to be exactly What is sounds like, your home. As a human i think we long after having stuff to call our own doesn’t matter what it is, but humans will always want to claim ownership. This is nothing new and it has been like this through human history, like colonies for example, which later once again because the same country as before lead by its own inhabitants. People will always want to be the one to decide what happens to them and when you rent your home you can’t even paint it without the owners permission.
If you as a person are renting an apartment there might be a lot of stressors in your life. A scrathed wall can cause you a major headache, because the wall was not yours. The bedroom you are currently sleeping in might not be available as long as you hope, things happen in life and maybe the next landlord won’t want to have you as a tenant.
In other perspective, not owning your home could be a relief when it comes to your finance. As a renter you won’t have to pay mortgage, take loans or spend an awful lot of money on buying the property. You woudn’t have to worry about the house market crashing or a natural disaster destroying your expensive home.
Bottom line, as a human i feel like we need to have a home and calling it your own can make that more special. I personally would rather own my house, because then whatever happens it is on me and no one else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.346875 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31106163037 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9784470648 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8235294118 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366967546594 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12694422412 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766453570055 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200364183142 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121400137933 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.