In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, many people claim that there will be a completely replacement of traditional daily or publication with free information on social network. From my perspective, since it is the begining of the digital era in which most of human activities will be based on information technology, I believe that human no longer will change their way of approaching information but respecting the copyright and payment issues need to be took into consideration.
Firstly, we have every reasons to believe that we are standing on the brink of a technological revolution which will fundamentally alter the way we live and work. Therefore, instead of depending on printed newspapers or books, nowadays people have more ways to track the news or gain new knowledge at any time and in every where. For example, with a smart phone connected to the Internet, we can do a lot of things ranging from watching videos, playing games,… to learning new things or even working far from home.
Secondly, we may also mention undeniable fact that approaching books for free on the Internet is copyright infringement in most of the cases. Particularly, every published documents are protected by the intellectual property rights regulated by laws, thereby leading to the fact that every acts of sharing or downloading these articles without permission of the authors are violating laws and must be strictly punished. In addition, if everyone can get whatever they need but no payment, all the authors or content creators as well will lose their motivation to create their new valuable works.
In conclusion, we are coming to the Fourth Technology Revolution and no one can be away from this trend, thus digital transference is definitely necessary for every people, every nations. Besides, not everything in the Internet is free and copyright need to be respected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('completely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('replacement') instead of another adjective.
...s, many people claim that there will be a completely replacement of traditional daily or publication wit...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...r gain new knowledge at any time and in every where. For example, with a smart phone connec...
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Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ging from watching videos, playing games,… to learning new things or even working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97905838964 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8770071538 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140671158609 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539483923743 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256792225604 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811976488619 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234977991349 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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