Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the effectiveness of advertising. While some people believe that advertising is the best measure for companies to increase the consumption of their custommers, there are still some opposite ideas that consumers do not take heed of those advertisement anymore. In my opinion, I assume that every kind of advertisement has their both sides of advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, we may mention an deniable fact that advertisements has done wonders for boosting the sales on products and services. By adding these short films during the prime time of the show, an enormous number of audiences can approach to the new products or services. Therefore, they will pay much attention to and gradually obsess with them, thereby leading to the fact that more and more people are convinced to buy and experience these new products and services. For example, some ritual noodles advertisements which have a very interesting content and pictures of a bowl of noodles full filled with vegetables and lobster though that is not real in reality are successful on attention-grabbing.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that advertising also has drawbacks as well as benefits above. Sending out these advertisements during the broadcast time can cut down the amount of showtime of programmes which must be played longer for audiences. Moreover, these promotions that keep interrupting again and again and cause information overload can trigger annoyance to most of the people; thus, everyone will no longer cast an eye over these videos. For instance, when we are watching our favourite films and it is on the climax part, a sudden advertising appearing on screen can extremely irritate us.
In conclusion, advertisements are not only certainly effective on improving the sales of products and services, but also sometimes bother people during their amusing time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'those advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; those advertisements
...deas that consumers do not take heed of those advertisement anymore. In my opinion, I assume that e...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tages. On the one hand, we may mention an deniable fact that advertisements has d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02227991759 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8370305768 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284786500866 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971030940568 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325579569494 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156707679948 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045002547842 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.