In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People in many countries believe that it is a significant decision to buy private accommodation rather than renting one. There are plenty of reasons that lead to this case but respectability stands out the most among the others. In my opinion, I am on the same side with those who argue that having your own house is a positive situation.
Initially, we cannot deny that we all command respect of people around us. According to Maslow’s hierarchy of needs, esteem needs which is one of the highest needs of human assumes that people want to be acknowledged from others that they are valuable and dignified. In other words, by working hard in their life to achieve the goods and properties, people can demonstrate their potential, enhance their socio-economic status and others will look up to them. For example, in some Asian countries, the ownership of a house is a widely measurement of success; thus, youngster in these countries consider this to be an important goals to accomplish.
We have every reason to believe that owning a residence is a positive trend nowadays. Firstly, you can do whatever you want to do in your own home without your landlord’s permission because you are the only owner to that property. Thus, you have the right to repair, to decorate every corner of your home at anytime and no longer worried about a little scratch on the wall or a broken window, for example. Secondly, this also means that you do not need to worry about payment in every months, the increasing rent expense or in case the landlord would suddenly cancel the renting contract and take back the house.
In conclusion, there are several of reason for this situation, but if I have to choose between owning a home and renting one, I will pick the first option as owning one would make me feel more confident and successful in my life.
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Message: You used an adverb ('widely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('measurement') instead of another adjective.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'goal'?
Suggestion: goal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.753125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64772713556 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596875 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3813814442 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344411085216 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106652661933 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629831328602 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189233978273 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297203046915 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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