In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People in many countries believe that it is a significant decision to buy private accommodation rather than renting one. There are plenty of reasons that lead to this case but respectability stands out the most among the others. In my opinion, I am on the same side with those who argue that having your own house is a positive situation.
Initially, we cannot deny that we all command respect of people around us. According to Maslow’s hierarchy of needs, esteem needs which is one of the highest needs of human assumes that people want to be acknowledged from others that they are valuable and dignified. In other words, by working hard in their life to achieve the goods and properties, people can demonstrate their potential, enhance their socio-economic status and others will look up to them. For example, in some Asian countries, the ownership of a house is a widely measurement of success; thus, youngster in these countries consider this to be an important goals to accomplish.
We have every reason to believe that owning a residence is a positive trend nowadays. Firstly, you can do whatever you want to do in your own home without your landlord’s permission because you are the only owner to that property. Thus, you have the right to repair, to decorate every corner of your home at anytime and no longer worried about a little scratch on the wall or a broken window, for example. Secondly, this also means that you do not need to worry about payment in every months, the increasing rent expense or in case the landlord would suddenly cancel the renting contract and take back the house.
In conclusion, there are several of reason for this situation, but if I have to choose between owning a home and renting one, I will pick the first option as owning one would make me feel more confident and successful in my life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...om my perspective, I reckon that owning an accommodation is a positive situation due to the fact...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...their own goals to achieve during their life time. Particularly, listing all the desires ...
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Line 2, column 603, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('widely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('measurement') instead of another adjective.
...ance their socio-economic status and be a widely measurement of success. For example, mostly Asian p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72340425532 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74731685985 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6186397831 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322653166318 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107271061091 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053077582076 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180110054031 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530046907298 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.