In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In most of the developing countries, it has become increasingly common and important for residents to own an apartment as an investment and possession rather than rent a home in these regions. In the following essay, I will explain why I believe it is necessarily a positive situation to own a residence and why I agree with these types of expenditure.
In my view, owning an apartment can be a type of investment and the buyers are more secured because of the possession. As an owner of the home, the purchaser is able to decide whether he would like to lease the condo or live thereby. As a result, a tenant could be restricted by the rules that the owner has established. For instance, the landlord could refuse to continue renting the apartment to the tenant if there is another great deal of property. In turn, the tenant is not able to do anything except to move to a new building shortly before the deadline. Furthermore, people usually prefer to buy the condo at one time in order to pursue a sense of security regarding this reason. Possessing a mansion avoids the case of losing a residence when the tenants become jobless and thus, do not have enough money to pay the tariff. Residents could relieve the burden as they pay the bill at once.
Moreover, I believe that the situation could ease the financial problems of the residents and also boost the economic development of the country. One reason for this is that the houses are relatively cheaper if you pay the entire bill at one time. Although it may seem to be a large amount of money, the prices of the houses are more ideal in the long-term aspect. It is because the rental would rise every year. For example, owning a residence could not only avoid the rising lease but can also earn a profit from the growing market prices. Last but not least, more venture in the buildings can uplift the national economy since it may attract enterprises to put funds into the market.
In conclusion, despite that at first glance paying the lease every month may seem to be a good idea, it is not really cost-effective in a long-term perspective and may actually suffer to reimburse more in the case. Therefore, I would personally recommend owning a condo as either possession or an investment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6475 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66761949123 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5632405144 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.277777778 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216171075815 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571034708424 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509699574399 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126937644027 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623615764968 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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